It had come to this. Thirst had hounded them all for days until the ceaseless circling of the roped off waterholes created tracks deeply rutted by their hooves. All of the usual spots had been blocked, barricaded with old fencing wire and tin. In desperation, one or two brumbies had charged and stomped, aiming flying kicks at the covers, but there was no reprieve. Smelling the water but not being able to drink was torture.
Two dry nights were spent warily watching the last waterhole. On the third night, some of the brumbies were on their knees, trying to inch closer to the moisture contained within the maze of fence runs. With a frenzied whinny one entered the compound despite knowing there was no way out. The gulping sounds drew the others in, no longer able to resist the trap.
This piece was a writing group challenge to write a piece of up to 150 words inspired by the word ‘Trapped’. It was based an image that had been rattling around since I had listened to a podcast about Eric Rolls and the Pillaga, months before. I couldn’t shake the image of the brumbies from my head, so the only solution was to write it out. You can find the section about brumbies around the 14 minute mark of the podcast.
[Photo: horses on Norfolk Island]
Very creative piece of writing! Were these wild horses walking into the trap?
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Hi Peter, yes the horses were trapped due to lack of water. Not a happy story but that’s probably why I couldn’t forget it!
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What a intro “It had come to this…” of course I had to keep reading a great 150 word short story 🙂
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Thank you!
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150 words? My, that is a challenge. I’ve written only a few flash fiction pieces. My stories tend toward long and I’m always working on shortening them. Your piece conveys the feeling of entrapment and thirst from the first sentence.
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Thank you! It depends on the prompt or inspiration, but sometimes I find the creation of something very small a satisfying challenge. Thank you for your comments.
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