Flash Fiction: 100 Words – Superpower

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No-one suspects an older woman. Especially one who has reached an invisible status. She had felt a creeping despair when she realised that people – men in particular – would rarely acknowledge her existence. No longer worthy of an assessing glance, there was an anger at first which mellowed as she realised that there may be some benefits. As a child the superpower she most admired was invisibility, and now she had it. She tested this new power with small acts of theft and deception. Being able to fade into the background was a blessing. Her wildest dreams were now within reach.

[Photo: near Parliament House in Wellington, New Zealand]

14 responses to “Flash Fiction: 100 Words – Superpower”

  1. Sean Crawley Avatar
    Sean Crawley

    Love it.

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    1. jml297 Avatar
      jml297

      Thanks!

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  2. Donna Cameron Avatar
    Donna Cameron

    Love it! Having also reached the age of invisibility, I can certainly relate. Where was this superpower when I could have used it in a more adventurous fashion!

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    1. jml297 Avatar
      jml297

      I know, right! It sure would have been handy! Thanks for your comments 😊

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  3. Therese Avatar
    Therese

    Love it!

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    1. jml297 Avatar
      jml297

      Thanks, Therese 😊

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  4. Peter Klopp Avatar
    Peter Klopp

    Invisibility has been a major topics in all great Science Fiction and Phantasy literature. So your 100-word story goes far beyond the plight of an old lady. It contains an important message for all of us.Have a great day!

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    1. jml297 Avatar
      jml297

      Thanks, Peter, and you raise a good point there 😊

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  5. msw blog Avatar
    msw blog

    This sounds like a great introduction to a wonderful read I say call it Aging Graceful

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    1. jml297 Avatar
      jml297

      Great idea! It certainly is something that could be expanded upon 😊

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  6. Nick Olson Avatar
    Nick Olson

    So evocative and interesting. We’ve seen “be careful what you wished for,” but this allows for some appreciation of it (no matter how nefarious her aims might be). I really enjoyed this.

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    1. jml297 Avatar
      jml297

      Thank you for your thoughtful comments – much appreciated 😊

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  7. whisperinggums Avatar
    whisperinggums

    Nice piece of flash fiction – and one I too can relate to. However, whenever I mention this “invisibility” thing to my 88-year-old mother, she denies it. Lucky her, eh? Actually, I think she doesn’t quite understand what I’m talking about. She says, people are very kind to older people. I say, yes they are – when they notice you, that is!! Haha.

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    1. jml297 Avatar
      jml297

      Excellent point! And I’m glad your Mum remains visible!

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