Day 11: Bite

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I was at the bar, downing the second schooner of beer. It tasted nearly as good as the first, but not quite. It was stinking hot and Iโ€™d been out in the sun all day. It was the promise of an ice cold beer that had kept me going, and Iโ€™d been relieved that the bar wasnโ€™t too crowded when I arrived.

A quick nod to the barman and the third schooner appeared without fuss or conversation. Just the way I liked it. Some people like to take their time and chat about their day. Me, I like to drink and keep going. Threeโ€™s my limit. I pushed the empty glass towards the counter and was just wrapping my fingers around the fresh beer when I felt a tap on my shoulder.

โ€˜Mate. Youโ€™ve no idea how pleased I am to see you here.โ€™

I didnโ€™t need to turn around. I knew the voice. Benny. He shuffled onto the stool next to me, a big grin on his face.

โ€˜What do you want, Benny?โ€™

He watched me for a couple of seconds. Well, not me, but my beer. My fingers gripped it a little tighter and I took a couple of gulps. The edge was off my thirst, but Iโ€™ve seen Benny cadge a cold beer from someoneโ€™s hands and I wasnโ€™t willing to take the risk.

โ€˜Nothing.โ€™ His eyes were still on the glass, and he licked his lips.

โ€˜Well, thatโ€™s all right then. Iโ€™m just about to head off. Things to do and all that.โ€™

Finally his eyes flicked over to my face. โ€˜Surely you can stay a bit longer. We havenโ€™t seen each other in ages.โ€™

This was true enough. But my recollection of the last time we crossed paths involved me handing over some of my hard-earned money. I canโ€™t remember the reason why. Thereโ€™d been some complicated story involving his mother or some other relative. Must have been his mother as I knew her. Sheโ€™d asked me to keep an eye out for Benny, and there was something in the request that I couldnโ€™t ignore.

The barman came into view and I nodded and held up two fingers. Benny brightened a bit and started to chatter on about the weather and how heโ€™d been looking for work but that things were tough. When the beers arrived I placed them both in front of him. His face lit up like it was Christmas.

โ€˜Are you sure? Youโ€™re the best.โ€™

A few moments of silence as he got stuck into the first beer. I knew his style, a couple of quick gulps and then heโ€™d sit on the drink, making it last as long as possible. He started talking again, quieter now. I nodded and we drank together for a while.

โ€˜Nice to see you, Benny, but Iโ€™ve got to get a move on.โ€™ I reached out a hand and we shook on it. It was part of the ritual. He nodded and smiled at me, then looked down at the note Iโ€™d left in this hand as if it was magic. Like it was the first time heโ€™d put the bite on me.

Inspired byย Discover Prompts โ€“ April writing prompts

[Photo: mini mural painting at Lithgow]

8 responses to “Day 11: Bite”

  1. Peter Klopp Avatar
    Peter Klopp

    A well-written story showing that kindness prevailed in spite of some bad experiences in the past!

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    1. jml297 Avatar
      jml297

      Thanks, Peter! This was one of those stories which seemed to find its own way ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  2. TheHiddenEdge Avatar
    TheHiddenEdge

    I really liked the twist in this story.

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    1. jml297 Avatar
      jml297

      Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  3. Lani Avatar
    Lani

    Another gem. I liked when his hand gripped the beer tighter to indicate the tension. Also, that he was generous in the end.

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    1. jml297 Avatar
      jml297

      Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  4. Ann Coleman Avatar
    Ann Coleman

    I like this…especially how he gave money to Benny, even though we didn’t think he would. Relationships can be so complicated!

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    1. jml297 Avatar
      jml297

      Thank you, Ann. And you are so right – relationships can be unpredictable and we often surprise ourselves ๐Ÿ˜Š

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